You really need to just open your eyes, if you want to draw.
These really is nothing attractive or promising about these sketches. The genders are indistinguishable and inconsistent in most ways, just for a start. The _only_ thing of quality is some proportions that you got right.
However, the proportions and detail, for either gender, do not reflect your actual skills shown in your other work. (Did you actually _draw_ all those female figurs yourself?? If so, it is not apparent in these sketches. )
This is probably not passing, or barely passing, work in any art class where your wok would be graded. What happened? Were these 1 minute-each sketches?
Just consider the master drawings, is all. Almost anyone can sketch better than these, esp after months of training. consider faces, perhaps, since you are still often in a squeamish / puritanical frame of mind....which is NOT for artists of ANY kind. Nudes have been the primary focus of western art for a few thousand years, but you see to not be ready for a variety of lifelike figures, if these are your sketches. Just consider the master drawings in any art textbook, is all. You will be well-rewarded....
You're in Deutschland? Its highly recommended that you goo to any museum with sculptures....there are only a million or so.....esp Berlin...and practice from those sculptures.....
If your other drawings on your pages are yours, then you have much promise....
Hast du zu erst die Figuren oder die Verbrecherfotobalkenwand (gibts dafür nen Fachbegriff?) gezeichnet? 2d ist so anstrengend umzudenken, vielleicht versuche ich es mal mit ASCII art aus Buchstabensuppe.
Mit Buchstabensuppe lässt sich kein hex code schreiben, weil die Zahlen fehlen. Und für richtige ASCII art reicht der Zeichensatz schon gar nicht. Ich würde also mit allem arbeiten was da ist. Und im Zweifelsfall ist ja jeder Buchstabe essbar. Man könnte ja die Suppe umrühren und mit kurzer Belichtungszeit Fotos machen, bis eins mit einem gefälligen Motiv herauskommt. Das ginge sogar in 3D, die Anzahl der Versuche würde sich aber potenzieren.
These really is nothing attractive or promising about these sketches. The genders are indistinguishable and inconsistent in most ways, just for a start. The _only_ thing of quality is some proportions that you got right.
However, the proportions and detail, for either gender, do not reflect your actual skills shown in your other work. (Did you actually _draw_ all those female figurs yourself?? If so, it is not apparent in these sketches. )
This is probably not passing, or barely passing, work in any art class where your wok would be graded. What happened? Were these 1 minute-each sketches?
Just consider the master drawings, is all. Almost anyone can sketch better than these, esp after months of training.
consider faces, perhaps, since you are still often in a squeamish / puritanical frame of mind....which is NOT for artists of ANY kind. Nudes have been the primary focus of western art for a few thousand years, but you see to not be ready for a variety of lifelike figures, if these are your sketches. Just consider the master drawings in any art textbook, is all. You will be well-rewarded....
You're in Deutschland? Its highly recommended that you goo to any museum with sculptures....there are only a million or so.....esp Berlin...and practice from those sculptures.....
If your other drawings on your pages are yours, then you have much promise....
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